Sharing Student Writing- Eat Pie!

We love student writers and are glad to share their work.  This persuasion piece is from Lorelei.  I dare you not to be hungry after you read it!

EAT PIE!

by Lorelei

Everyone needs to eat pie! Pie is good for you. Pie is also tasty. And if you are having a bad day, eat pie and you will be “happified!”

Pie is good for you. Everyone knows that butter is dairy, and dairy is good for you. Also, eggs and fruit are filled with healthy goodness. So there. Now you know that pie is a good, healthy snack.

Pie is tasty because it is sweet and crusty. When you eat it, your mouth says, “MORE!” Its buttery, gooey crunchiness makes your tummy feel tangy. Pie is delicious!

The smell of pie makes lots of people think of summer. Most people love summer! You can eat pie with your family, and then when you eat pie alone, you remember your family. Summertime and family makes you more “happified.”

Now you should understand that pie is good for you, tasty, and last but most importantly, pie “happifies” you!  So run home and eat some pie!